Peru's Amazon, and Venezuela's Angel Falls (Two Poems with Commentary)

The Amazon: Enchantress [Peru]of the order of the mind--a strange beauty indeed;
(The river and its jungle)thus, the verse blended in this poem here is the labor
I would recount the time, your crown, allured:of a dim eye (a clap of the eye also), in the back of
Your majesty, that charmed me, to yours,my mind:
O, wild, beguiled, Enchantress River1
Your lore and years and livelihood reigns.I did not go to the Gran Sabana over Angel Falls, for
With lazy waters, easy sways your treesjoy, or forthe burning stars at night; nor did I expect to
Proudly like a child, twilight sings victory,see mountainscalled: Tepuis--towering over the
Along the banks of your jaunty breastshighlands, and its virgin terrain
So rests, triumphantly--my earthly flesh.(a lost world, I do maintain). But rather, I went for
Your sweeping wide skirt, of blue and greenquietness, whichcovered my wishful eyes. But joy I
Laden with boats, combined animals scenes,found in natures wonders,amongst the winking
A treasure chest, filled with wondrous things,star-lit-nights;--the Jungle!
You are the sweeping Amazon--Enchantress ...!2
#1131 1/31/06O, yes, I've trekked through her rainforest; sat on the
La Gran Sabanaedgeof her towering peaks, looking up and down,
[Salto Angel]Angel Falls
(Advance) I left the madness of the city to seek out(3000-feet). Walked her plateaus, descended her cliffs,
the jungle of the Gran Sabana that melts intoretuningto civilization--with an uplift. She is timeless, par
Amazonas in the year 2000--(year of 'Beast' for me).excellence,to anything on earth; in the vein of a
How shall I tell you what I've learned? Its beauty is outwonders dream!